I laughed. I cried. I have been reading the Judas Kiss pages this whole week. It’s been an amazing experience going with Carlos on this rewriting journey. Reading the script is like riding a roller coaster. And what’s awesome is that he took my short 80-page draft and turned it into a rich and multi-faceted script of 110 pages. He respected the structure and spirit of the script and added layers of über-brilliance.
I can see the images so clearly in my head. It’s as if he has lifted parts of my experiences right out of my subconscious and created this fuller and cleaner story.
I swear [damn], everyone should have a Carlos™. He can be a bit moody, requires food every 3 hours, demands clear and concise communication, and hates words not found in Merriam-Webster, like Chutloo, Monumentus, and Litereally. But damn! can he write!